Tuesday, September 16, 2008
The Women of Evangel
Alison's Storytelling
Intended Patience in Observation
The story is pretty much a chronicle, which covers about two to three months of Carolynne’s life and how her family – Rich, Melissa, Brian and EJ – cope with her death. Most photos are taken within their home, shifting from the living room to each of their bedrooms, the kitchen, dining room, yard and the sidewalk – everyday places that we can all relate to. I noticed that there were several taken in the bathroom, and I thought it was very brilliant because it will give you a feeling that the photos are very personal and we feel as though we are merging into their family life. As Carolynne was ill, a lot of pictures of her lying in bed or the couch were taken, which also probably gave it that up-close and personal touch.
My favorite photo(s) is that of EJ on their last Christmas together. A series of about five photographs were taken from the same angle, and you can see and follow EJ’s excitement as perhaps his gift from Santa was opened. I thought it was just amazing how Carolynne was sitting next to him and how I was able to see her face lit up as EJ ran out with joy.
The only thing is I thought that sound editing could have been better. They did an excellent job on the interviews, but I thought some music or short audio clips actually taken from the photo shoot (like they had in “A New Dawn?”) would have been even better. However, overall I must admit am just emotionally full today at just taking a look at the award-winning multimedia projects.
Monday, September 15, 2008
Compassion
A Thousand Words
Nothing short of amazing
The first multimedia project I viewed was "A New Dawn?" about a mother of five in Kentucky who was strung out on drugs. I admit I am not always sympathetic to drug abusers because I feel it's a problem they brought on themselves. This was the first time I was moved by a story like this one. I actually felt like I was one of her family members or something by the content of the photos and the quality of her story. After having taken pictures myself, I have so much respect for the photographer. It reminded me of a broadcast story in that the photos matched very well with the dialouge, but there was nothing else distracting in the scenes that took my attention away from this mother.
The second multimedia that really moved me was "The Malboro Marine". What is interesting about this project is that the title suggests it may about a Marine who smokes cigarettes, but it isn't. Cigarettes are tied heavily into the photos and setting of the project, but the photographer and the soldier never directly talk about it. I think that's the essence of good story-telling. Neither the photographer or the soldier who narrarated the piece ever had to directly talk about the cigarettes, but it's evident in the shots and in his voice that it's deeply entrenched in him, but that there's so much more to his problems than cigarettes.
On a personal level, these projects left me very depressed. For hours after watching them I couldn't bring a smile on my face because I kept thinking about the pictures and the problems of this world. After having some more time to reflect on them, it revealed to me even more the power of good story telling. Here I was just killing some time in between classes, and these projects changed my outlook on the world. Each story dealt primarily with one person, but there was something in their story that made a connection with you. I don't think I'll ever forget that Kentucky mother, or even look at single mothers with numerous children the same. And it's not to say that every mother or every soldier or every encaged animal (from "Black Market") has the same story, but the point is that there is a story for every subject. I was nothing short of amazed.
Grief: Context Gives More Meaning - Tomeka Weatherspoon
Sunday, September 14, 2008
Mountain Workshops: Effective Storytelling
When scanning through the various projects, I came upon the presentation about Danville, Kentucky, and was pretty impressed.
I particularly liked the combination of words and sound to accompany the photos. I feel the creators of the package strived to completely represent the town and what it stands for. The clips about Hal and Gladys were touching and serious, while the dog trainers clip and the skateboarding teen clip provided a slightly lighter feel. Danville is a diverse and special place, and the authors of the package accomplished their goal. I noticed several little things, like the subtle changes in the music. For lighter clips, the music was more aloof, while the serious clips featured softer piano cues. Attention to the little details set this package apart and made it award winning.
Thursday, September 11, 2008
Multimedia Presentations - Pictures of the Year (Kate Chizek)
To be honest, I thought the story was about Ann Coulter's family. I just clicked on it, interested in the political commentator's home life. What surprised me was that the story was about the I35W bridge collapse. The pictures of the family after the incident were devastating. What stood out to me most was the picture of the spectators, taking pictures on their cameras, with the look of shock on their faces (notably the priests at the Archdiocese) . To me, it seemed like September 11 - you don't really know how bad it was until you were there.
Gehrz did a fantastic job of covering the family through their recovery process. The mother, Paula, was most effected by the incident - to be honest, because of the pictures after the collapse, I thought she had died. I literally cried when I saw that she had lived. This recovery process is probably still continuing for the Coulter family, and to get a glimpse of their everyday life - their dogs excited to see their owners again, the daughters trying to get back with high school friends on sports teams, and the family testifying in court about the incident - really touched me. I am glad I took the time to watch!
Wednesday, September 10, 2008
POYi multimedia: A new Dawn?
POSITIVES:
David Stephenson's first-place winning "A New Dawn?," a multimedia project for the Lexington (Ky.) Herald-Leader, boasts fantastic black-and-white photos put together over several chapters. It tells the story of a single mom who has undergone significant abuse and is now working her way through drug court.
As I moved through the project, I was touched by the photographer's compassion, especially those photos involving the mom and her children, because they showed her for who she really was, despite her shortcomings. The best picture, I felt, was one in the final chapter in which she is holding her youngest child. In the background is a two-way mirror, indicating she still hasn't broken free of the court system and of being monitored. The ending was sad and real, because I wasn't sure whether she would succeed in her efforts to regain her children.
The photographer is clearly skilled in getting access to this woman in all aspects of her life. I've had to arrange for court photos before, so I can appreciate a little of how complicated the process is.
CRITIQUES:
On the other hand, I wasn't completely impressed with the soundtrack, and I wasn't convinced that aspect was even necessary. As I understand it, the use of music is controversial, because while it is great (when chosen right) at evoking emotion, it can also be seen as a crutch or a gimmick, much like tilting a camera at an angle for a diagonal-looking shot. I didn't think the music was entirely appropriate. I automatically draw the connection between the music and the mom, and since the music sounded, at times, like a hip-hop beat, I automatically assume this is the kind of music the mom is around most days. That would be fine if it were accurate, but for all I know, she's a hard-core country fan or way into John Coltrane's "Giant Steps" album. I would have liked to know more about how the music was chosen.
I would have also liked more identification of the people in the photos, whether by captions or by people introducing themselves by voice ("My name is Bob Smith, and I'm Dawn's parole officer," or something like that).
Monday, September 8, 2008
the challenge of photojournalisms
Thursday, September 4, 2008
Good Advice
The pictures by David Snider were probably my favorite part of this homework. I love how he can take an ordinary experience or moment, and make it into something worth looking twice at. Having always been a people watcher, I've seen little things that most people assume go unnoticed, and I can't wait to get out with a camera and try to capture them on film. He brings forward the everyday that doesn't usually get looked twice at, and the everyday simple things have always been some of my favorite parts of life. David made me excited to see what I can do, and gave me confidence in my own potential.
Always pack toilet paper
The Biggest Quality of them All - Audacity
I thought “The Great Picture Hunt” by David LaBelle was the exact set of guidelines for me in this point during the course where I am about to take some photos of total strangers. Most helpful were photographs set right next to each rule and explanation. They were so deliberately put together with a purpose to illustrate exactly what the rules meant; most photo examples spoke for themselves.
The best photographer I personally know is my brother. Whenever you have him on a trip together with a camera, you can be pretty sure that your Facebook will be loaded with some nice pictures. However, he probably won’t make a good photojournalist just yet, mainly because of his bashfulness. He is the kind of guy who is gentle, a little too much at times, and detests talking to strangers. That means even if he has a great idea, technique, angle or whatever to shoot the perfect picture, he might miss the chance to even start because he can’t reach the subject matter. If he were to be a photojournalist, he ought to get beyond himself and talk, mingle and react with them. I think this quality – audacity – is one of the most important, if not THE most important, characteristics of a photographer.
Coming from Korea, a country interspersed with IT, I am a blogger myself. I like to pick a photo out of my camera and write a couple of sentences – sometimes about the photo, or sometimes thoughts arising from that photo. I have considered myself a photojournalist in my own little world. Through my amateur experience, I guess I have had a chance to learn some of the major points made in the reading. However, I think the article was significant in that it give an idea of how to make all of that actually happen in your viewfinder. Everyone knows that emotion in a photo is important, but in order to reach out and grasp that emotion, that angle and that humor – you will have to be audacious. Yes, LaBelle speaks of hunting and puts the photographer in the position of a hunter for feature photos; a hunter requires being audacious most of the time, too!
The latter parts of the reading about his tips regarding hunting methods are written down in my notebook. Although some of these points may be obvious, I think abiding by the rules as a novice will be of great help in completing my future assignments.
About David Snider’s street photos, I just loved how everything was black-and-white. My favorite picture was one with little kids on a playground bridge. It seems that the kid on the left is trying to wiggle the structure and the kid on the right is scared (I won’t assume the gender of neither). I just love it because of the humor and emotion in the picture. It was also a good example of what were said in the reading.
photo j really is an art!
An aspect of finding a good feature was preparedness, which I am proud to say is a great quality of mine. Backing up your work (whether by saving or double checking those facts), starting projects on time, and staying organized are skills I love having. Although this applies in a different way to photographers, I think being prepared is a skill benefits all careers, but especially journalists.
From the second chapter, I really like the parts about catching the emotions of people. It's a difficult thing to do, but when accomplished really speaks to people. The areas of composition and humor were a little harder to grasp, but I think it's because I'm a beginner.
My favorite part of this week's readings by far were the photographs by David Snider. My favorite photo was the one of the children on some sort of bridge on a swing set in the park. This was partially due to it being children, but also because it really caught their emotion. One child is crying, another is staring blankly away, and so on. Children are not reserved in their emotions and I think this photo did a great job of showing that. I can't wait to take my own pictures next week!
Reading The Great Picture Hunt and looking and David Snider’s pictures was extremely motivating. I have always loved pictures, but have little experience with the camera, except little snapshots of my family and friends, which hardly counts. David Snider’s pictures perfectly captured so many little moments that LaBelle described—those fragments of life that make statements about the human condition. I especially like his line, “A moment is that magic time when all the elements, like bars on a slot machine, come together to pay pictorial dividends.” The last picture of the two blind people was especially touching, especially because the caption says “My Parents.” I’m assuming that means LaBelle’s parents are blind which is an interesting twist for a person with such a heightened sense of perception to have blind parents. But then again, that is probably why he has developed such a keen eye in the first place.
I’m going to really work on patience throughout my journey in learning how to photograph well. Not just patience, in waiting for a quality moment, but patience in developing the techniques, methods, and characteristics that LaBelle describes. I am eager to instantly possess all these things, but I know it will only come after numerous trial and errors. I really like the concept of his idea treee too. I am a habitual note taker on pretty much everything, but I’m going to start incorporating more visual notes. Also, I never thought about searching the classified ads, the personals, or the yellow pages for ideas. There were some very humorous examples of the odd things people have going on in their lives that few people know about…such as the man looking for a room to let his snakes exercise.
An Unwritten Language
I think what we, as amateur photojournalists, should strive for is what Snider exemplifies so well. We need to tell the story of the photo subject. One photo in his catalogue comes to mind immediately. The photo captures two people using canes to feel their way along the sidewalk. I am assuming these people are at least partially blind. They’ve come to a crosswalk, but halt at the street, waiting until they have some sign to cross. What is so unique in the photo is that hanging right above them is a crosswalk sign that is flashing the clear to cross signal. To me, it shows the plight of visually disabled people in America. We live in a very visual world, but not everyone has the ability to enjoy this world.
Another point we can take away from Snider is his ability to talk across differences (sorry for the Cross Cultural throw-back). We see him capturing people from different races, religion, age, class, etc. He gets on the level of the people. By doing so, he gains the trust and respect of subjects, I would assume. Taking lessons from Snider is important, because he is able to convey a complete message through just one image.
I just sit in awe. (Kate Chizek)
As I begin to pinpoint my convergence project, these words of David LaBelle in "Picture Hunt" hit me most: "Simple, uncluttered images . . . are easy to read because the reader doesn't have to hunt for the message. These pictures are called 'quick reads.'" This speaks to what my photography friends have always told me about pictures. I have borrowed their cameras and tried to capture emotion and original phots, but they always tell me I need to step back. I don't need multiple subjects in a photo. Rather, like LaBelle says, simple pictures help you to see the moment, rather than give you a whole background story of the situation. I hope to sit back and let my subjects do the talking. Hopefully I can achieve this in 4802.
Picture-Taking 101
Photography and Me
Wednesday, September 3, 2008
'The Great Picture Hunt'
I came to appreciate the importance of captions tonight as I came to the end of the PDF. The final picture shows a moose, presumably the one that, only a page before, was up and running from police, still and on the ground.
I was so afraid that it was dead, but upon reading the previous caption, discovered it had merely been tranquilized and moved elsewhere. Whew.
It was mentioned in class on Tuesday and again in the reading, but talking to sources and networking seems to be key. Great photo ideas can emerge from this, and these conversations lend themselves to rich captions. I'm guessing that conversation also helps put photo subjects at ease with you, the photographer, standing around and waiting, as the reading suggests, for that perfect moment.
I think that when I do my assignment for next week, I'll try to ask my subjects about what it is they're doing, or things they're very comfortable with, that they know like the backs of their hands, which takes the conversation off of them and onto the things they're familiar with, their work. That way, it becomes easier for the subject (and me as the photographer, for that matter) to talk about ourselves without being totally put on the spot.
I'll also plan to keep an eye on my ideas, and perhaps do some brainstorming about photo possibilities in advance. It never hurts to have a game plan.
Photos and Words - Tomeka Weatherspoon
Curiosity and Humor
When David Labelle wrote about the importance of curiosity, it instantly reminded me of my friend who recently completed an assignment for one of his photo classes. His assignment was to take pictures of 10 different strangers. He decided to leave Columbia for this project, but on his way out of town he saw an old man with a cane walking along the side of the road. Curiosity led him to double back and pick up this hitchhiker, and he not only got good and original photos, but he got to hear an incredible story as he volunteered to drive the old man to a town 10 miles away. My friend said that if he didn’t have classes, he would have tried to follow the man for a week to get more of his story. He has the curiosity that will make him a good photo journalist.
Something else that stood out to me in this assignment was David Snider’s picture of a man ice skating in Rockefeller Plaza. It has so many of the elements of good photography that David LaBelle describes. My first reaction was laughter. There is definite humor in this photograph, and that is greatly due to the composition of the photo—the ice skater exactly mirrors the statue. Additionally, LaBelle captures a single moment. Any other moment with the skater’s body positioned in any other way would not have created such a great photo or such great humor.